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Revision and Growth

The two drafts

This page shows one piece of writing at two times. You can see how my writing changed.

Choose one piece. Put the older version on the left and the newer version on the right. Do not delete the first draft.

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What changed

  • Words I changed. Write one or two sentences.

  • Sentences I changed. Write one or two sentences.

  • Ideas I added. Write one or two sentences.

Feedback and what I did with it

  • My classmates read my portfolio: Write one thing a classmate told you, and one thing you changed because of it. Do not write your classmate's name.

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  • Dr. Morsi read my portfolio: Write one thing your teacher told you, and one thing you changed because of it.

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  • What I am still working on" Write one thing you want to keep practicing.

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